Comments for Revision

Comments for Revision

Step 1 àDid the draft meet the assignment guidelines?

Step 2 àWhat is the purpose of this paper?

            - identify thesis

            - identify topic sentences

Step 3 à Look at reasoning/ argument.

-          Did the student provide support for points?

-          Are points connected?

Step 4 àLook for organization.

-          Do topic sentences relate to the thesis?

-          Is there a clear transition between paragraphs?

-          Identify the purpose of the paragraph.

-          Identify the main points of each paragraph.

-          How are the main ideas of the paper/ paragraph related?

Find ways to give praise.

Help the writer identify their strengths.